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4. Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students?
- I think daily homework is necessary for students. Because many students are going to forget lesson very soon. And they must study hard, but they just play. That is not for teacher. For students.
5. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. It is better for children to grow up in the country side than in a big city.
- I agree that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Because they can learn about nature not only from book. And, my friend from country, he is very healthy.
6. If you invent something new, what product would you develop?
- If I invent something new, I want invent sleeping machine. Many people are very busy, so they don't want spend much of time. It's function is help deep sleep spend a little time.
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4 answer:I think daily homework is not necessary for students, but for teachers because most of students know what they are doing. In other words, they know their shit. Teachers should leave students alone.
5 answer: I disagree that it is better for children to grow up in the country side than in a big city . Because there are more sexy bitches living in a big city. You know that.
6 answer: If I invent something new, I want to invent a sex machine that satisfies many bitches.
살구야님...약간 어색한 부분 만 수정해 본다면...assign보다는 give 가 자연스러울 듯합니다..그리고 daily homework 가 앞 문장에 이미 나왔으니 대명사 it으로 바꾸는 게 더 낳죠..그리고 앞 문장이 또 반복되니..I think so 라고 하는게 더 낳구요..are going to forget 보단 tend to forget 으로 바꾸시고..lesson very soon 보다 What they learn very soon이 더 낳겠습니다..그리고 They jwould ust kill the time without homework..That is not for teachers but for themselves로 바꾸면 좋겠네요...
시간이 없는 관계로 여기까지만 해드립니다...나머지는 다음분이~~